Connection to Reality

Bismillah ar-Rahmaan ar-Raheem,

Asalamu3laikum,

Hope everyone is doing well. I would like to make a suggestion: The script needs to have a beginning, middle and ending that make sense and have some connection to reality- 'What's the reason for Hassan's loss of hearing/sight?' InshALLAH, I will be in LA next week and would like to meet with you guys to discuss the project?

Take care